Saturday, February 26, 2011

Dream?

I keep falling into a strange and unwanted dream in which I die a slow, silent and motionless but painfull death breathing in a cold cloud of round crystalline droplets of acidic smoke.

Crashing voices echo in my brain and all seems far and dry.

I keep breathing as the pain slashes and tears the nerves, and stretches a shroud of slab numbness over me.

Angel maggots fly around and buzz in short and cyclic series of shrieks, and scream in melodies in harmony.

Any interpretations?

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Young man,
Don't know about any interpretation,
That can fit your fantastic narration...
But there may be a fitting place,
For advice and a measure of suggestion...
That don't go to bed, o' handsome lad,
Too wasted with a tummy full,
of yummies,
Yet in need of digestion...
LOL :))

DJN

Babak Khoramdin said...

That can be a good lyric for a new song... ! Thats my interpretation!:)

Egregoroi said...

Thank you both!